WRITE 28 DAYS: DREAM POEMS – Day 19


When I close my eyes, 
I follow the dimmed paths that 
remain, the faintest impression 
glowing beyond the next bend, 
beckoning. A strange landscape arises, 
gradually or whole cloth, there 
in the faint distance, detailed 
and intentional and not my design,
a blueprint unfolding like a secret scroll, 
like a speeding train gobbling the land 
as I rest my head against the window, 
eyes closed, unwatching. 
It’s the scenery that moves. 

I haven’t drawn this map nor 
plotted this territory and I ever wonder 
where I am, what world, shrithing within 
what’s dissolving already, this hasty 
improvisation that, regarded directly, 
just as soon vanishes. So I’m not direct. 
I rummage, my inner eye
transiting like a cloudy moon, never
pausing, never resolving, day and
night casting a slim shadow
ahead, makeshift markings found
as I steal past and sidle toward 
the edge of this small imploding
figment for as long as I can. 

©M Wms 2024

3 responses to “WRITE 28 DAYS: DREAM POEMS – Day 19”

  1. Elizabeth Anne Meller Avatar
    Elizabeth Anne Meller

    excellent today. Especially the last two lines which I saw as not wantint the dream to end. but cleverly worded.

    1. Liz, Yes! I don’t want it to end, but it always slips away, disintegrates. For me, though, this isn’t a dreaming poem but a dream-adjacent poem. It’s what happens sometimes when I close my eyes but I’m awake, looking at what my mind’s eye sees, forms and shapes that have been created inside my head apparently for my sole amusement. As I walk/look, I don’t know what I’ll see next. It’s always surprising.

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